The essay which I got 0 for content.

This is the essay I wrote..

You guyz judge, should I get a 0 for content?

Is that fair?

He said that I'm not allowed to write what happended yesterday..

so wht he expect?write about tomorrow?
Essay should be a freedom of expression, rite?

Siao!

Although my essay is abit lame, but doesn't mean he can give me a 0 for content..rite?
Although this essay is abit illogical,but tht's essay rite, It shouldn't be real..
And I'm vr sure tht each and every paragraph I wrote links to the title YESTERDAY.

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Yesterday

Yesterday was a day which I can't forget forever. Yesterday was the day of the announcement of our SPM result. I woke up before dawn yesterday.

I woke up very early yesterday because I wanted to prepare myself to school early. On that morning, everything went wrong, everything doesn't go on my way, when I woke up, I went to the bathroom to take a bath, after shampooing my hair, suddenly the water supply stopped. Before I can reach for the door, the lightning struck and there was a blackout in the neighborhhod and I was panic because the shampoo is still on my head. After a while, things came back to normal and I sigh with a relief because I can continue my bath.

Then I prepared myself and got on a bus heading towards my school and suddenly I realise that I wore different colour socks. I felt ashamed and awkward as everyone in the bus were looking. When I reach school, I saw my friends with blonde hair and I felt very weird as I was not having dyed hair.Then I headed to the hall to look for my result. when I looked at my result, I shouted out "I did it!" I finally achieve my goal! We also took some photographs with our teacher for memories.

After that, me and my friends went to the new mall near jetty to get ourselves some new clothes ang shop to celebrate our achivement. There was a sale in the new mall and we got ourselves dozens of new t-shirt. We also ate at the famous Hong Kong restaurant there after we shop. Then we met up with a few friends and we went for karaoke in Redbox. Some of us sang and some of us relaxing and listening.

In the evening, we went to the pasar malam at Farlim and we saw alot of products seld thre. I got myself a MP4 and a sportshoe. we also saw some magic show at one of the stalls in the pasar malam.After that me and my family went for a grand dinner in a hotel to celebrate my success.They were happy for my achievement. My parents also gave me a present as a reward.

After that, I went home and sat at my massage chair after a long and tiring day. I also watch my favourite movie yesterday. Yesterday, I went to bed late because of the excitement which I have in the morning.